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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Please R/R/C my new one
    Ancraophobia.
    Please be honest, and leave as much info as possible.
    i will return the favor.

    i feel like its one of my best yet.

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  • ether
    16 years ago

    Amazing work.
    My newest one would be good but you don't have to, it was an absolute pleasure reading your work =]

    jess ~

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Done :-)
    anyone else?

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Doneee.

    any more takers?

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  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Donnnnnne. Good work.

    Could you do "My Requiem" please?

    Thanks!!!

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Done.

    ive heard the word requiem before but i had to re look it up. thanks for teaching me a new word :-)

    any more?

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  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Hahaha No problem.

    By the way, I thought your analysis was pretty insightful so I was wondering, did you mean that you thought it would be better to actually re-write the poem? Or to just space out the stanzas?

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    If it could be spaced out by simply pressing the space button and not having to edit it.
    that would work great.

    but not redo it,
    but maybe edit a line or two to fix the flow,

    once its spaced let me know and ill look at it and read it again and see if theres any other things i can think of.

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  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Alright, I spaced it out. I agree, it could make it easier.

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Any more takers?

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  • Mishka
    16 years ago

    Yes yes yes :) any poem youd like....
    hehe

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  • Christopher Hantman
    16 years ago

    Done :-)

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