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  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    Read/rate/comment my 2 poems and I'll return the favor for 3.
    Be honest so I'll improve alright? :)

    1. When she came into my Life
    2. Shooting Star

    Thanks ;)

    *If you don't rate I won't rate yours*

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Okay!! al done!!
    hehe
    love your poems..
    keep it up!!

    you can comment on
    1. Broken Inside
    2. The Crow
    3. Seeking confort in Nature

    Thank you!!^_^

  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    Done, anyone else?

  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    No one wants to comment? :(

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    Sure! I'll just comment and rate now, gimme like, 20 min =]

    One tick

    xx

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    Okay, I've done,

    "When She Came Into My Life"

    =]

    Bout to start the next! =]

    xx

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    * Sigh..

    Done! Both :)

    Hmm you can do two if you want, I dont mind :)

    1. "Sixty-One" Please Note: it is a real personal poem, and my Grandad was a painter, so which is why you may not understand the last line :)

    2. "Because She Is Me" This is one I wrote earlier tonight :)

    IF you feel like doing a third one:

    3. "No One Can Mimic" (Like I said, ONLY if you want to :])

    ^ Thanks in advance! And take your time! No rush :D:D

    xx

  • january friend
    16 years ago

    Deal, i'll go look at them.

    1 A Stranger:Part I
    2 He Who Lives Alone
    3 White Rose, Red Sails
    (if you dont mind reading a bit)

  • vintage darling
    16 years ago

    Done :)

    can you please comment
    somewhere only we know.
    and any other two that catch your eye
    thanks

  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    Done yours NiCoLe ;)

    *I'll do your 2 poems tomorrow.. I'm not really in the mood to read today.*

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    Hey!

    its the first time i've read/rated/commented your poems :)

    I loved them! A few things here and there.. but hey, no one's perfect :)

    Thanks for the wonderful comments! I've praised them all ! :)

    Good luck! :D:D

    xx

  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    Thanks nicole :)

    I did yours january friend.

    Anyone else?

  • Marc Ortiz
    16 years ago

    I did yours vintage darling :)