The Water Was Never a Dance

  • dollwithafrown
    16 years ago

    I'm looking for some comments on my piece of prose: The Water Was Never a Dance.

    Pretty please? [1 for 2, is the deal.]

  • dollwithafrown
    16 years ago

    Anyone? :|

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Done, please r/r/c on any two of my most recent poems..

    Thanks :)