5 for 10 big deal!!

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Ok here's the deal please read my newest work!
    Be honest i rather have it that way.
    Read Rate and comment!! i will do the same for you!!
    and i will keep up with it..if not i'll let you all know...
    So there you have it 5 for 10

    1. "Evil Puppet"
    2. "Angel With Blue Eyes"
    3. "Playing On The Snow"
    4."Love, Happiness, and Sadness"
    5. "Ready To Die"

    so there you have it..
    please leave the names of the poems you want me to read, rate, & comment. if you don't care then i'll just read what ever catches my eye!

    Thank you all in advance!!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Thank ya'll!!
    Hehe i'm looking foward to reading all your poems!!!

    I'm on it right now..

    XP

  • ether
    16 years ago

    Donee.
    Any of mine, I'm pretty sure you haven't read any before.

    Thank you =]

    jess ~

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Ether and Night mare child i'll get on your poems later on the day i'm really busy but i will definatly get to them... don't think i forgot!!
    because i haven't hehe..=D

    but yes i will get to them.

    ***people right now i'm really busy reading other poems...so if you want me to still comment in your poems i will, but be warned it will take a while. but i'll definately read them!!**

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    You got a deal. i'll do your 5 would it be possible to do my latest, they haven't got much feedback yet.

    they are called

    .Just another love poem
    .I tried
    .My love is fading away
    .Life goes on
    .No one but you
    .The things i do for love
    .Lonely i am not. (acrostic)
    .Am i truly in your heart ( redone )
    .just choose 2 you are interested in

    thanks in advance

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Ok nikki i'll get to your poems as soon as i can. i'll make time in my busy schedule. but i promise to comment in all of them ok!!
    thank you and i appologize for the inconvinience!

    Ada aka Ady. hehe

  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    They'll Never Let Me Into Heaven
    Crypted Thoughts
    Pretend World
    Truth Suffices

    Any that you choose

  • Bianca The Queen Of Hearts
    16 years ago

    Can someone read and comment my poems id really appreciate it! i need advice on how to make myself a better writer.

    ~Bianca

  • Dark Savior
    16 years ago

    I thought I had R/R/C'ed on your poems already and I'm sorry I haven't. I wouldn't mind if you did some of mine. I would prefer if you did some of the new ones.

    I don't have a choice other than my new poems.

    I must say that you're a very talented writer.

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Done, please pick an 10 of mine.

    Thanks

  • HidinVictim
    16 years ago

    Ok im done... pretty good can you do
    Step to the side
    What happens after the break-up
    I'm giving up
    Just another suicide note
    Murder
    Choke
    A bloody goodbye
    sexy silver blades
    Choking on the past
    unanswered
    Amazing ffeeling and ripped apart dreams
    please and thank you

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    Hey, I really enjoyed your poems.
    I dont have any personal preferences on what poems you read. So take your pick :)

    I havent written in a while so they are rather old.

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Ok every one ...due to my college work i'll get to your poems when i have time..i will rrc each and one of your so please be patient with me....don't think i bailed i'll get to them..probably this weekened...and thank you all so much for reading my poems..!!!!

    ok my peeps i'll talk to you later!!!

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    Ok. thanks i read what you wrote to me above