Love Contest {Titled}

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    ~~~~~~~~~~~RESULTS AT BOTTOM~~~~~~~~~~~~

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    May I please reserve: "All I Have To Do Is Dream" and "What Kind of Fool Do You Think I Am?"

    Thanks!

    .:CiiNDY:.

  • ether
    16 years ago

    Things I should have said
    What kind of fool do you think I am
    Reserved pleaseee and thanks :)

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    May i please reserve all i have to do is dream please. i wrote it a while ago i hope it's ok. it is about when i lost my partner and about moving on without him day by day

  • nikki
    16 years ago

    All i have to do is dream

    by Nikki

    When I want to see you
    I know all I have to do
    Is lay there and close my eyes
    I know you will be there with no disguise

    I cannot find you when I am awake
    You were taken and I now have heart ache
    Death stole you far too soon
    But my love for you still shines as bright as the moon

    I see you gorgeous smile
    I get to hold you, if only for a while
    I remember what it is like being in your arms
    And I remember your tender loving charms

    You still look perfect to me
    As gorgeous as can be
    I whisper in your ear I love you
    And you whisper I love you to

    My dreams are my heaven
    To keep you with me, I am beggin
    I hear a funny noise while I lay in your arms
    I open my eyes to find, it is just my alarm

    Until tonight my darling, same time same place
    You are the my only one I could never erase
    I shall see you tonight until than my heart shall scream
    But I know to see you, all I have to do is dream

  • Twisted Heart
    16 years ago

    I Never Loved You Anyway, please and thanx

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    "Things I Should Have Said", please?
    Thanks.
    :]

  • Cooper
    16 years ago

    I'll take "When the Heartache is Over", thanks.

  • Twisted Heart
    16 years ago

    I Never Loved You Anyway
    By: Twisted Heart

    Under the walls of distant dreams
    I hang my head in fear
    No longer do I feel your arms
    No words from you I hear

    Inside this heart I shudder deep
    Againgst the soul is pain
    My mind is weak with lonliness
    Teardrops fall like rain

    No hope is left inside my breath
    As soul and heart fall free
    So many tears find their home
    Deep inside of me

    But words fall silent on a mind
    As you walk away
    My tears are lost inside myself
    I never loved you anyway

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    'Gone, gone, gone' and 'When the heartache is over' please

  • BREEawNUHH
    16 years ago

    I'm afraid I have to unreserve. I'm sorry. I seem to have writers block.

  • Beautifully Disfigured
    16 years ago

    "Hard to say I'm sorry" please and thank you

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    ~~~~~~~~~CLOSING DATE WILL BE THE 20TH NOV~~~~~~~

  • Bre Monique
    16 years ago

    I'd like to reserve "He Ain't Worth Missing" please.

  • Bre Monique
    16 years ago

    Here it is. Came out longer then I meant it to.

    [ He Ain't Worth Missing ]

    All those late nights staring out the window,
    waiting to see your face
    All those tears shed on my end,
    knowing every night I was being replaced

    All those screaming matches we had
    when you finally came home
    The loneliness I felt, when you would walk back out,
    leaving me alone

    All those times I dialed your number on my phone,
    knowing that I shouldn't
    All those different female voices I heard,
    each time naively hoping I wouldn't

    All those lies you told me
    that I was way to smart to believe
    But also way to much in love
    to actually walk away and just leave

    All those fake promises you gave me
    that I held on to daily instead of you
    All those moments wondering what I was doing
    that would make you do what you do

    All those times you would raise your hand at me,
    and I would actually fear for my life
    Only to have you apologize later
    with promises to make me your wife

    All those times I would get so fed up
    but never have the strength to walk away
    All those times I would come so close,
    only to decide in the end to stay

    All those times I thought it was impossible
    for me to actually get out
    Until the day came when I found someone else
    and saw what love was really about

    All those times drowning in you,
    finding it so impossible to break free and swim
    All those times finally erased,
    replaced with memories of me and him

    All those times I cried
    because I knew I wasn't the only girl you were kissing
    Makes me even more grateful for him because frankly,
    you're not even worth missing

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    I would like to do

    Don't want you back
    and
    I never loved you anyway

    Thanks

  • ether
    16 years ago

    What Kind Of Fool Do You Think I Am?

    Too many sonic waves traveling through stomach and head,
    Too much to dwell with your imprint leaving my bed.
    Hardly do I remember what it is to sleep anymore.
    Instead, stolen the sky that served as your floor,
    That charcoaled, with my arms covered in wires
    Of a simple approach, one that is yet to tire.
    I was a fan of pluto before anyone lost a smile,
    Smearing charcoal across the sky seemed so worthwhile.
    Like a voice dark and thick, retracing through my veins,
    Though you could not bring yourself to feel anything the same.
    Apologies left dangling from nooses so tight,
    Still I think to myself of what the dark must look like.

    Written with http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=126269 (Kellie).

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    "All I Have to Do is Dream"

    You showed me wonderful things,
    Things I will never forget.
    I've always wondered if they were true,
    But now I see they're not.

    You made me believe you really cared,
    Like I was the one for you.
    I've shed those many tears for you,
    And now I regret ever shed those tears.

    Everyday I wonder how life would be without you,
    But now I see how life really is.
    It's more beautiful than I thought it would be,
    All I have to do is dream about my perfect man.

    .:CiiNDY:.
    .:11-9-08:.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    "What Kind of Food Do You Think I Am?"

    I've shed tears for you,
    Tears you never noticed.
    You're stupid to understand,
    How much I really cared for you.

    Is there something wrong with me?
    Am I doing something wrong?
    No, that's not it, this I know.
    I won't blame myself no more.

    I've been there for you listening and helping you.
    But it's all worthless and disappointing.
    You made me feel like a big failure,
    Like I didn't do enough to help you out.

    I thought you had really changed,
    But you led me to believe your lies again.
    You don't want a relationship,
    Or maybe you just don't want me.

    It's ok though, you're not the only one out there.
    There are better guys, better than you.
    You'll regret losing what you had,
    But when you do, I'll be out of your life

    .:CiiNDY:.
    .:11-9-08:.

  • AlmostLover
    16 years ago

    May I reserve,"I don't care anymore"?

  • AlmostLover
    16 years ago

    *The ex-boyfriend crying please*

    I told you I did not care,
    I told you I was done,
    You dissapeared in my eyes,
    And you were blinded by darkness,
    As you choked apon your lies,

    The untold Nightmare,
    And the untold truth,
    The feelings that I once had for you,
    They all vanished into thin air,
    Along with our memories,
    And all the times you said you cared,

    Im walking away from this shattered fairtale,
    And your sadly worded lies,
    My broken wings suddently appeared wonderfully fixed,
    So now I am able to fly,
    I figured out that I was just caught in the web of your tricks and betrayful lies,
    And now im free,

    I dont care anymore,
    What a happy ending,
    Welcome to the book of the Ex-Boyfriend Crying Please,

    You thought that I would fall,
    And come crawling back,
    But I'm still standing tall,
    And I'm fully healed,
    And infact these words are truely real.

    By:Kathleen Mazza 11/11/08

  • rhend
    16 years ago

    Gone,gone,gone

    by Rhend

    I wandered through fiction to look for a cure
    to mend the wounds she brought in my heart
    i looked around & there i saw you
    smiling at me so sweetly that time.

    enthralled upon your glamorous face
    it allays me in my deepest pain
    you alone erase her name
    a curse that was planted inside of my brain.

    you thaw my torment of her memory
    & take away all of my ,misery
    so i am thankful that i met you
    in that coldness of that eve i dreamed of you.

  • rhend
    16 years ago

    Reserved please " how do you like me now?"

  • rhend
    16 years ago

    How do you like me now

    by Rhend

    I will remember what i was
    the timid boy in our class
    stood after you upon a distance
    while fond of staring at your precious smiles.

    i am the one guilty on sending you letters
    & the one who brought flowers on your birthdays
    I'll do it once,twice & again
    i will do it forever for your sake.

    it was all about love & evolution
    it is about the progression of my own emotion
    now I'm gonna show the depths of my affection
    & my devotion for your Divine perfection.

    years that I've waited for this hour to come
    to confess all the words that lain in my heart
    tonight i will reveal the truest of mine
    gonna ask you somehow: "how do you like me now?"

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Don't want you back

    You turned your back on me.
    Leaving me all alone in this cruel world.
    Why should I ever take you back?

    Using me that's all you did
    hurting me knowingly
    I refuse to take you back.

    Guess what I have found
    someone new and wonderful
    who wants me for me.

    You had your chance and you messed it up.
    I will never let you back in to my life.

    I don't want you back.

  • ether
    16 years ago

    Things I Should Have Said

    Spilt milk is dripping from the counter,
    Excuses come easy but not resolutions.
    I'm looking for definitions in the bible,
    Where does it give us solutions?

    Stop, relax, sit back, take it easy,
    What would your mother think of that?
    Took your hand in mine under the table,
    It's not so easy to turn it all back.

    Simple days soaked in sunlight,
    Made us smile, but left us blind.
    I never spoke when I should have,
    All we are and were is undefined.

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    I Never Loved You Anyway

    Though I always
    gave you my all.
    I was never sure
    if my heart was yours.
    Did you love me?

    When you decided to
    leave me behind.
    I realized that you
    didn't mean that
    much to me.

    Things had been fine
    between you and me
    but there was never
    that extra something
    special, that little spark.

    I just realized that
    I never really loved you.
    We had a good time
    while it lasted but
    it is now time to move on.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~RESULTS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    1ST PLACE: (6 in depth comments)
    I Never Loved You Anyway
    By: Twisted Heart

    2nd PLACE: (5 in depth comments)
    Things I Should Have Said
    ether

    3RD PLACE: (3 in depth comments)
    He Aint Worth Missin
    SensualGoddess

    Everyone else will get one in depth comment on a poem of their choice.

    Please pm me titles.

    ***I WILL get around to these, but please give me time, I have a few comments still owed, not to mention it's the holidays and I'm busy working overtime so it may take longer than I originally thought it would.***

    Thank you to all who entered!