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Shakespeare in action(a shakesperean sonnet)

by Rhend

The rain performs a song of melody,

In which the world lull by its harmony.

By the pitch of the wind they sang in rhyme

perfectly emulates a lullaby.

Mimicking the flicker of a thousand stars

'tis droplet of rain falling from above.

As they dances lively in bliss;

keeping up a rhythm, change it all to fantasy.

Thou must worry not in this special day,

smile and let the sadness be fade away.

Upon burying the melancholy

come and lit the candle of ecstasy.

'tis god scheme,anyway....

I'm here to greet you "BHEA" happy Birthday.

Also here in this ff. piece of mine:

The Temptress

Nostalgia

Think of laura

If i dream of you tonight

Anathema