"Beautiful Coma" 1-2

- Name : Krista
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Krista
16 years ago

It's my latest poem. It's about a person in a coma, fighting between death and life, with a somewhat happy ending.
Read please. Post which one you want me to r/r/c
Thanks

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- Name : Dark Savior
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Dark Savior
16 years ago

I have done it, pretty good poem.

"Judgement day"
and another of your choice.

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- Name : AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
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AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
16 years ago

Okay I did it =]

-Dear God-
&&
any other of your choice
=]

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- Name : andhereIstand
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andhereIstand
16 years ago

Thatw as a wodnerful poem, but youll hear all about ti in my comment =)
can you pelase do 'just elt me scream' and any otehr of your coice (preerably a newer one) thank you!

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- Name : The Angel of Secrets
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The Angel of Secrets
16 years ago

Ill get right to it

Please do two of my feautres

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- Name : Krista
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Krista
16 years ago

Okay I will get to these as soon as I get on a real computer, because right now I am on my iPod

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