R/R/C Needed for New and Old poems.....HELP PLEASE

I have some new poems that I need some advice on as well as a lot of old ones.
The more of my poems that you R/R/C the more of your poems I will do.

Deal: 1-2, 2-3, 3-3 and so on. If you do up to ten of mine I will do up to 20 of yours. Haha I have a lot of poems so I need all the help I can get.

Rules:

1. no 1-2 lines
2. try to give some advice or tell me what I did right.
3. you have to rate or you'll get nothing in return.
4. try to enjoy the poems :)
5. leave titles here if you don't want me to randomly chose what poems of yours to r/r/c

Thanks a head of time :)

Hey . I know you already did some of my poems , but just do the ones you didn't yet . I'll do a few of yours , thanks ! (ps , you don't have to do doubles . Just comment on the number I comment on <3)

Hiya, I did Lightning. Just pick one of my feautred poems if its not too much trouble thanks :)
Sole x

Done, who's next?

I did `Lightning` (:

Please do `Necessity`
and any other that catches
your eye. Thanks in advance!

Please read and review some of my poems it woudl be great, im defenatly going to read and review some of yours. I look forward to reading them

Done, anyone else?

Come on guys anyone?