Yet another title contest!

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Wow, it's been forever since I've done a contest but I LOVE them and have been craving a good one. So here yah go! Some titles are from songs, others are just some off the top of my head. But I hope you have fun!!!

    RULES:
    1) Must reserve your spot
    2) Please don't make it 30 verses long
    3) Can be old or new...but MUST fit title
    4) Maximum, two titles per poet
    5) If it's explicit just give me the link
    6) Have fun!!!

    DUE DATE:
    Dec 1st

    AWARDS:
    1st place- 15 comments and rates
    2nd place- 10 comments and rates
    3rd place- 5 comments and rates
    (depending on how many participants) 2 honorable mentions

    TITLES:

    I'm Already Gone:
    1- xJenni Mariex (DONE)
    2- Italian Stallion (DONE)

    Hard Times, Soft Touch:
    1- Alissa (DONE)
    2- CheckerBoard Romantic (DONE)

    Mommy Dearest:
    1- A n g e l i q u e (DONE)
    2- A Phine To Sour Skittles (DONE)

    Harboring Demons:
    1- ReBecca (DONE)
    2- Cyber Saiyan (DONE)

    The Art of Seduction:
    1- ReBecca (DONE)
    2- Cyber Saiyan (DONE)

    You're My Guilty Love:
    1- Beautiful Chaos (DONE)
    2- rhend

    Cigarettes and Coffee:
    1- Ether (DONE)
    2- Novalyn Grace RRL (DONE)

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    "You're My Guilty Love" please

  • ether
    16 years ago

    Cigarette's and Coffee pleaseee!

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    I'm already gone please

  • ReBecca
    16 years ago

    The Art of Seduction please. How do we submit them? Do we post it here or PM you? Also. does the title of the poem have to be what we picked or just the subject matter?

  • ReBecca
    16 years ago

    I'll also take Harboring Demons please.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    I'll take, "I'm Already Gone"

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    It has to be the title. And you post it here unless it's explicit...then just post the link here and I'll read it :) Thanks!
    ~Jules

  • ghosts in bloom
    16 years ago

    `Cigarettes & Coffee` please (:

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Reserve: Harboring Demons

  • La Muse Angelique
    16 years ago

    May i have mommy dearest please?

  • ReBecca
    16 years ago

    Harboring Demonsby ReBecca

    Up in fire!
    Gone in smoke!
    Brothers just playing
    "Your Dare to my Joke"

    Down....
    my world crashes!
    Our home has burned from flames
    to just a pile of ashes.

    A pet dies.
    Our kitty's in another place.
    Brought to me half alive
    with oxygen mask on her face.

    Dies in my arms.
    My baby's pet!
    Killed by a fire
    that he accidentally set.

    All locked inside.
    Feelings he wont share.
    Mourning the loss
    of a kitty beyond care.

    "It's okay"
    I say to him.
    "I know that it wasn't
    just a whim".

    But I can't erase
    his endless guilt
    from seeing his kitty's gasping body
    suddenly wilt.

    A child's dare.
    A family's home and pet.
    Killed by a fire,
    he accidentally set.

    ReBecca Sanchez

  • ReBecca
    16 years ago

    The Art of Seduction

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=1075838

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Only 5 spots left!!! :)

  • ether
    16 years ago

    Coffee and Cigarettes

    White is your favourite but the hardest to be made
    When you believe innocence is just a facade.
    "I'm too good at smiling, but I never laugh",
    Drowning my clothes in a cigarette bath.

    "We're like tetris pieces, the way we fit together"
    I refused to say that is the side of you I like better.
    Another side hid in the back of your head,
    Comes out only when your faith is half dead.

    Picked you a daisy that had turned itself black,
    This is the innocence you'll ever have back.
    Took your smile straight back from hell,
    So short of breath, "you know me too well".

    Fell asleep with myself, my true one and only,
    Too often confused are alone and lonely.
    Eyes as white as a coffee stained jaw,
    Remembering what it's like for feet to meet floor.

    Fell asleep but woke up in the night, my body tingling.
    Knew that you were dreaming of me with feathers mingling
    On my back, so wrong to think I could carry you,
    Then you dreamt of me alone, surprised to find that I flew.

  • rhend
    16 years ago

    Your my guilty ones please...

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Harboring Demons

    Mine is about self harm, so i feel better posting the link. Anyone is welcome to read, but wanted to make sure not to offend anyone.

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1081105

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    You're My Guilty Love

    I love the way you slither down
    My throat, a smooth dry burn
    Before long you're in my head
    In all I can discern

    Your amber waves touch my lips
    The world just goes away
    I'm everything I've ever dreamed
    Inside my own decay

    Wasteland of a drunkard's vision
    Whiskey bottle gaze
    I'm guilty of so many things
    That's what our love portrays

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    I'm Already Gone (Acrostic)
    by Italian Stallion

    In and out,
    Memories go.

    A love once there
    Lingers within.
    Round the earth,
    Engaged my heart.
    A day passes by,
    Deep past the sky.
    You my love, now gone,

    Gone to heaven, with
    Open arms. Crying,
    Now I lay already gone.
    End of the road, but the start of something new.

    © Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    I'm Already Gone

    In these past two weeks we've only spoken twice
    This lack of communication slowly killing me inside
    Just cause I don't show emotion, you think I'm cold
    Baby you'd be shocked if you knew how much I've cried

    Is it surprising to know that everyday wait by the phone
    Still loving you even though I'm drowning in heartache
    Wishing we could go back to how it was, rectify the past
    Though I'm well aware loving you was my biggest mistake

    Tried so desperately to fix this disastrous mess we created
    Still so indecisive, want it all back then don't want to know
    Been apart for a while yet you still control this heart of mine
    How can you say you love me then do nothing but ignore?

    Lacking your affection causing me to become so numb
    Can't you tell me how to deal with this sorrow and pain
    After everything we've been through, now nothing left
    Was everything we pledged to each other really in vain?

    Maybe you're realizing you still have my heart and soul
    But let me warn you, don't think you can still lead me on
    Though it may be a while of, eventually the day will arrive
    When you realize you want me back, but I'll already be gone

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    3 spots left ppl. Great job to everyone so far...it's gonna be a close one! :)
    ~Jules

  • Alissa
    16 years ago

    Hard times, soft touch pls.
    thanks. :)

  • Alissa
    16 years ago

    Flow of Death

    A full sheet of collapsing entity,
    falls onto my sorrow heart
    as I dream of your voice,
    of every lasting moment we shared.

    Our love is like a sweet song,
    being played over and over.
    Yet with each note strung,
    or each vocals sung,
    it's nothing like heard before.

    We are a couple
    living for years on this wretched earth,
    living through love,
    with the same two hearts,
    yet a new beginning every morning.

    Your presence gives me a chill,
    as when a poem does when each word,
    each phrase reaches your heart.

    You are as a poem to me
    that I memorize word for word,
    that I reread until the morning arrives.

    Then you shall still remain my poem,
    but with different words,
    more fantastic than the words before.

    Yet death lingers into our future,
    will we stay together as souls.
    Or mindlessly fall,
    fall into oblivion with the others.

    The souls that lost their meaning
    when love escaped their lips.
    Shall we fight it and live as ghosts,
    feeling the cold emptiness,
    never touching, speaking to others,
    people around you living?

    Will love be enough when death seeps in?
    The question also flows,
    almost like your poem and our song does.
    But this flow is different,
    it flows constantly like a river;
    of blood through our veins.

  • La Muse Angelique
    16 years ago

    Mommy Dearest

    My mother
    The one supposed to be your best friend
    How come I don't feel the same way?
    My mother who's trying to steal my freedom away

    Too overprotecting, I hardly can breath
    The cage I'm in is locked silently
    My life already planned out in front of me
    Mom? Don't I have anything to consider to say?

    My opinions don't mean a thing
    And always reminding me her words are the right thing
    Never a kiss, never a hug
    It makes me sad that coldness has taken over our hearts

    Please let me live my own life
    Make my own mistakes
    And don't tell me I told you so
    Since you don't really know what has been going on
    I have to learn from life the way I want it so

    You are losing your child this way can't you see?
    And that's because of your own choice, you want it this way not me
    I didn't want this you know that, the fights, the arguing
    But you give me no choice, the future uncertain ahead

    I can honestly say that I hate you right now
    Those awful names you called me
    Aren't the ones said by a mother your only captured by hate
    So mommy dearest where will we go from here?

    I just want you to let me go
    It won't be easy for you that I know
    But for the both of us it will be a better thing
    To accept the changes that are going to be in both of our lives

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Reserve: The Art Of Seduction

    Let your love belong to me
    Lay with me for all eternity
    Share with me your hopes and fears
    Hold my hand as we travel through the years

    Fear not what the future holds
    I will be with you as it unfolds
    Do not worry about the present or the past
    For our love is strong; our love is vast

    Wrap yourself in the love we share
    Love so strong, none other could compare
    Surrender your mind and body to me
    As we express our love physically

    As the sun continues to disappear from the skyline
    Secretly giving access for the moon to shine
    Laying here after making love
    Gazing at the starry night above

    Nothing could match the emotions we express
    Breaking from a daily life of stress
    Making time away from a world of routine
    Perfecting a marriage with such pristine

    Kissing, caressing, and making love to you
    Is the only thing I ever want to do
    As long as I love you and you love me
    We walk hand and hand for all eternity

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Hard times, soft touch...last spot! Hurry and get it! :)

  • Curing the Comon Cliche
    16 years ago

    Hard Times, Soft Touch, Please

    I gave you the smallest kiss
    Your hand hid a smaller blush
    My love, I know it hurts
    Hard times call for a soft touch

    Simplicity at it finest point
    Is it really simple at all?
    One strong push can make you slip
    But the softest makes you fall

    Wet grass underneath our backs
    Watching starts flicker on and off
    We can speak a thousand words
    And not once have to talk

    I miss you more than fish miss air
    I don't know id that means too much
    But all I know is that this hurts enough
    Hard times make me miss your touch

    "And these nights I get high just from breathing.
    When I lie here with you I'm sure that I'm real,
    like that firework over the freeway.
    I could stay here all day but that's not how you feel."
    ~Something Corporate

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Awesome guys! Just two more poems that are needed to be entered and I'll judge. Either way I'll be judging in 5 days. Can't wait! Great pieces! :)
    ~Jules

  • ghosts in bloom
    16 years ago

    `Coffee & Cigarettes` (c) Novalyn Grace RRL

    The morning tastes stale in my mouth as I inhale,
    Slowly opening my weary eyes to the new world.
    Light seeps into my pores, encompassing all limbs,
    Its warmth reminds me of your hands old whims.

    As I twist and burst out of my cotton cocoon,
    Aches and nausea remind me never to drink again.
    The carpet feels cold under my bare naked sole,
    And I'm reminded of each precious moment you stole.

    Through the walls a beep resounds and reaches my ear,
    Morning is official now --- as unwelcome as he is.
    Dragging my limp body out of bed, I make my way
    Through the empty rooms that still echo your Betray.

    The kitchen swallows me whole into its walls, taunting,
    While familiar cravings stir within my heart and mind.
    Your perfectly framed face rests directly across from me,
    Calmly representing nothing but hurt and falsity.

    That night I found you `dancing` with those secret silhouettes,
    Is the reason I'm still crying between my coffee and cigarettes.

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    Ok guys, I should be able to judge it tonight or tomorrow. Thanks for all the entries and good luck to everyone! :)
    ~Jules

  • Midnight Sun
    16 years ago

    So I'm working some crazy a*s hours so it'll be just a couple days but I promise to judge as soon as possible. Thanks for the patience!!! And good luck to everyone!
    ~Jules

  • Cyber Saiyan
    15 years ago

    Any update on the results?

  • Midnight Sun
    15 years ago

    Omg. You guys must all hate me...I've just been so busy. I got engaged so sad to say this has been the last thing on my mind, with planning everything. So sorry to all. I'm posting the results now. Again, SO SORRY!!! :(

  • Midnight Sun
    15 years ago

    1st place: A phine to sour skittles, Mommy dearest

    2nd place: Ether, Coffee and Cigarettes

    3rd place: Cyber Saiyan, Harboring demons

    Congrats to all, and did I mention I was sorry for the wait? :(
    I'm commenting now!