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  • Steven Topaz
    16 years ago

    Put a poem on here of yours that you want critiqued as much as possible, (I do not vote unless you score a 5)
    I give very long comments when im in the mood and now is one of them, Feel free to *caugh* praise a comment if you like it.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Can you please do:

    We Will Forever Lay (Collab)

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • Sole
    16 years ago

    Rose's Thorn

    If you're still in the mood :P

    Thanks, Sole xx

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Please do

    Lightning

    Thanks =)

  • Steven Topaz
    16 years ago

    I will be tonight and italian i did your comment took about 15 mins i submitted it then i disconected from the internet. and it didnt submit

  • Courageous Dreamer
    16 years ago

    "A Beautiful Fairytale."

    Thanks.(:

  • Curing the Comon Cliche
    16 years ago

    Could you comment my poem

    Vampire

    Thank you.

  • Steven Topaz
    16 years ago

    To those of you still watching this topic and are going to look at it, I just had a smallish chink in my life occur tonight and commenting poems now would be haphazard, but I will try to get to them by the end of this weekend .

  • rhend
    16 years ago

    Please view and have comments on my poems

    1.the temptress

    2.shakespeare in sonnet

    3. if i dream of you tonight

  • Needer of You
    16 years ago

    Please critique my poems
    1. Look at her
    2. Its Love
    3. Her Paper Heart

  • Suicidal Love
    16 years ago

    Any of mine please

    thanks xx

  • Austin
    16 years ago

    Could you comment "The Wolf" please.

    Thanks!

  • Christina Gomes
    16 years ago

    "Destination Reached"

    thank you =]

  • isabel
    16 years ago

    Could you please do

    "A Perfect Night" ?

    Thank you ever so much

    *isabel*

  • Sumit Ojha
    16 years ago

    Done!

    Can you please do:

    Princess

    Sacrifice

    Thank you in advance,

  • PlasticSmile
    16 years ago

    Could you please comment "Maybe Tomorrow", It would mean alot, and i'd really appreciate it, thanks tons.