Simple 1-1

1 R/R/C = 1 R/R/C

I prefer criticism. I want to improve more than anything. I'm not bitter if you're a one-liner kinda person, though. I do give good comments [at least, they're what I consider good] and I give them no matter what I get. I'm completely honest. So, I'd appreciate 'real criticism' instead of one liners, but whatever floats your boat.

You can do any poem of mine and I'll return it.

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Thanks in advance. :]

I have rrc one of your poems could you please look at my newest: Death of a Gentleman..Thank you

Beautiful piece you had.

"trapped demons" i belive. i rrc.

do any of mine. much thanks<3

Anyone else?

I did 2 of your poems. Please do

Move On
and
Winter Storm

Thanks =)

Done.

Anyone else?