"Far Away" - 1 for 1

New poem.
'Far Away". It's for a contest. Read, rate and comment, please.

Rules:
01. No one/two/three liners. I won't return the favour if you leave them.
02. Be honest.
03. Leave titles, and, no, "my latest" will not suffice unless your poem is titled, "My Latest".

Thanks. <3

Good piece, hun. :]

meh, i have two new ones.
" Far Away" ( lol, weird eh. i bet it's for the same contest too)
" My heart yearns for what they've lost"

Whichever you want to do out of those two. I could careless really, they both need a lot of work. lol

It seems like we are all entering the same contest...^^

Your poem is great :)
I really enjoyed the read...

Could you please r/r/c

A Perfect Night

thanks

Please r/r/c on my poem 'Happily Never After'

THanks

Thank you all for the wonderful comments. I will get to yours this evening. :]

R/r/c "Destination Reached"
please and thank you =]

Donee.
"Learning to Dance in the Rain."

Thanksss (:

Simplyfrigid, done. :]
isabel, done.
Needer of You, done.

Just letting the ones I haven't done know that I will do them tonight. :]

Christina Gomes, done.
Temps, done.

Anyone else?