Double deal. [up to 8 comments for you]

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Edit:
    I now have 5 new poems

    NEWEST: Our Opposite (really want this one commented)
    My heart yearns for what they've lost.
    Far away.
    Bring forth the lost battles.
    Lost within the murders.

    - - -

    I will double whatever you comment. 1=2/2=4/3=6/4=8.
    Those are the only ones I want comments on, truly. The older ones are from a long time ago and I want to start anew. Therefore, if you comment my older ones I most likely won't return unless it's for the 4 listed above.

    My comments are generally long and truthful. Im 100 percent truthful, what comes in my head while reading goes out while commenting. I rarely give 5/5's and probably give out too many 4/5's. But, I am honest and I hope to get the same in return. I really would like to improve and can't seem to do so on my own.

  • Dark Savior
    16 years ago

    Done.

    Please do my two newest pieces, with honest opinions, if you like them or not..I really appreciate it.

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Done, I did 2 of your poems. Could you Please do

    What Have We Done
    Lost Time
    Don't Want You Back
    and
    Heart Braking

    I'm pritty sure that you have not done these ones yet but if you have don't worry about it.

  • lisa marie
    16 years ago

    I can do this.

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Done!

    Anyone else?

  • XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX
    16 years ago

    Yes do my newest 4

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Done. :]

    Anyone else??

    If you do my newest:

    "Our opposites"

    and give me good criticism, without the whole " I know this won't help because it's good" thing... I'll give you 3 comments for that one. And, that one only. I know it needs a LOT of work, which is why I'm doing the 3 for 1 (ONLY if you give good comments)

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    I voted and commented 2 of yours. :]

    Could you please do the same for..
    `Color me Happy
    `Fallen Star
    `Loves Glorious Song.
    `Velvet Whispers of a Tempted Heart.

    thank you. :]

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Done.

    Anyone else?

    P.S. Remember "Our Opposite" gets you 3 comments in return. The amazing writer above didn't notice that and I like for people to that way if there's specific poems I can do specific poems. If you don't leave an extra title though, I'll randomly pick.

  • Blissful
    16 years ago

    Thank you!
    truly means a lot.

  • PlasticSmile
    16 years ago

    Done (:

    Comment whichever poems you'd like

    Thanks in advance

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Done. :]

    Anyone else??

  • Hurtingsoul
    16 years ago

    Sure im up for it

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    All done. :]

    Anyone else??

  • Cella Bella
    16 years ago

    I r.r.c. 2 of yours. You can choose any 4 of my featured poems. :]

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    I left three more r/r/c/v's for you. Dont feel too obligated to r/r/c on mine. If you would like to, be my guest.

  • Krista
    16 years ago

    Done. Rrc Our Opposites. Good read.
    Please do Cold Slate, My Short Lived Life, and Beautiful Coma. Thanks!!

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Done. :]

    Anyone else??

  • kelleyana
    15 years ago

    I will