Powerless. [1 for 2]

  • forevertobeart
    16 years ago

    I have a new poem titles "Powerless.", and if i could get some honest critiques on it, i would greatly appreciate it. feel free to critique any of my other poems, and i will double what you've done. thanks.

    1. more than three lines (or i won't comment back)
    2. put some thought into what you say (or i won't comment back)

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  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    I left a few comments.

    Please r/r/c any of mine that you see fit.

    Thanks.

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  • forevertobeart
    16 years ago

    Done :)

    anyone else?

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  • Empathy
    16 years ago

    If you could please do "The Garden" I would appreciate it. You don't really have to do anything else. For right now, I'm just looking for critique on that poem specifically.

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  • PlasticSmile
    16 years ago

    Done :)

    could you comment
    - Suicide
    - Maybe Tomorrow

    thanks

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  • lisa marie
    16 years ago

    I will

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  • Sumit Ojha
    16 years ago

    Done...

    Please RRC my following poems

    Princess

    Sacrifice

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  • forevertobeart
    15 years ago

    Done with all of yours. :)

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  • Dark Savior
    15 years ago

    Done it. Very good read.

    Please do "The Torn Prince (Black Zodiac 3/12)"

    And my newest poem.

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  • forevertobeart
    15 years ago

    Done :)

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