Sad Poem Contest

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Sorry they have all ready been Juged. And The winners Are:
3rd is wind upon the waters.
2nd is simply fringid
And 1st places is..........
A Phine To Sour Skittles

Ok so this is a sad poem contest about breaking hearts or getting your heart broken. You can post link here or poem whatever works for you. It can be old or new whatever you like.
1st= gets 3high votes on a poem and 3 comments
2nd= gets 4 ok votes on a poem and 2 comments
3rd= gets 3 ok votes on a poem and 1 comments
Due date is 12/13/o8
so good luck and have fun.
I love pie,
sarah

Poeples in the contest so far, there maybe more people on the list soon. Here they are:

His Angel
ReBecca
A Phine to Sour Skittles
Mark
xJenni Mariex
Wind Upon The Waters
simplyfrigid
Forever His Love aka Temps
A n g e l i q u e
Hollymariee
NyellMoonlight

I'll give it a try.

Me too. So do we post here?

When is the dead line?

Queen For A Day

I hear you call me baby,
but I don't feel you're mine.
The feeling doesn't fit.
It somehow doesn't align.

It sounds like you're just saying it.
In a way, trying to pacify me.
We never talk in depth,
and when we do, you seem to flee.

We're both so dominant,
and you want a lady.
I can give you that appearance,
but my colors are shady.

There is no black and white.
I fall in between.
Not quite a lady,
but still a Queen.

I've been bad and I've been good.
I've practiced realms of neglect.
I've been loved and hated,
and still depend on experience to reflect.

My feelings are wide open,
but I think you might interrupt
these feelings I have
and make them corrupt.

We reap in this life,
things we've sowed.
We give sometimes,
but are due whats owed.

Maybe it's my turn
to suffer a bit.
Wondering if this is real,
or if it's just time to quit.

ReBecca Sanchez
12/2/08

Regret

This aching pain
has been consuming,
this weakened soul of mine
since the day you went away.

I never told you
just how much I loved you.
The regret of that
still eats at me sometimes.

I wish that I knew then
What I know so well now.
I can still feel your touch
Your hugs used to keep me going.

We both made mistakes
that we can never change.
Sometimes I wish we could
just go back in time, make things right.

But that is just another empty dream.

Due date is 12/13/o8

You can post the link

To bid you farewell

Frozen blood
A whistle in the bones
voices deep within
a gentle kiss on the chin

another minute
never dying memories
waiting words
forever hurts

silence rises
getting cold and dark
I feel trapped in hell
when I bid you farewell...

All I Have Left Is A Broken Heart

Again been playing those "get over him" type of songs
Trying to fool myself as I'm singing passionately along
Been swearing that over you, never again will I cry
But sitting here alone tonight, know I'm living a lie

For locked away in this cold room hundreds of tears fall
Arguing with myself over if I should make that call
And everyone thinks that I'm okay, that I've moved on
But I still can't believe the fact that you're really gone

Didn't know I could feel all this pain yet still be alive
And I can't make sense of how I'm feeling inside
Really thought I was over tears until I heard our song
Within seconds I'd broken down, couldn't stay strong

Still I'm yearning to once more see your beautiful face
To be nestled again securely in your comforting embrace
Go back to when our relationship was perfect, so sure
Don't know how much more pain I'm able to endure

Every single day and night spent glaring at that phone
Recalling how it was you I used to call when feeling so alone
But now you're gone, and this heart is empty once more
Is it only me who thinks what we had is worth fighting for

Long silent days pass, still you're always on my mind
World used to be technicolour, now may as well be blind
Pretending to be happy but dying inside, oh how cliche
They say time heals...this pain is more intense each day

Tearing myself apart thinking of what we could have been
Never any peace for every night you still haunt my dreams
Never love anyone but you, you know me better than anyone
So why haven't you figured I'm lying, that I'll never move on?

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1020429

I'll give it a go. (:

Behold My Breath.

His words behold my breath,
the tears that fall do dry.
My imagination can't grow fonder,
for we've given our last try.

His smiles touch my soul,
unanswered prayers no longer matter.
My fears shall not stay cold,
for my teeth no longer chatter.

His hands for-warn my heart,
the memory that shatters...
My words cannot be spoken,
since my life no longer matters.

Can it be a old poem?

Yes it can

A Broken Heart Left to Die Alone.

Through these dark eyes that no longer smile,
I can see your pain, it's transparent; visible.
Every deep cut that bleeds from your heart,
reminds me that I am the one who caused this.
Tears flow down my cheeks, staining them...
with the pain that I have put you through recently.

Obscure mind encompassed with thoughts of you,
tangled together, producing one big knot so firm.
Resulting in pure disarray, impossible to unravel.
Resistive to anymore thoughts to enter this mess,
for it will only cause more trauma; the fog will only-
solidify, thoughts will entwine into a tighter knot.

Broken heart that bleeds, screams your sweet name.
Shattered to pieces, stomped on, left to lay on the floor-
along with yours silently cracking, demolished, bleeding.
Forlorn heart yearns for love a third time, yet knows that-
it may never love again, already crushing your heart twice.
Although it was not intentional, my heart deserves to die.

Put a flaming match to my heart, watch the colors fade.
Let the debris of my heart singe along with my darkened soul.
After a while, coals will be the only thing remaining on this-
cold ground, symbolizing a broken heart left to die alone.
All memories that it has experienced along the way-
will diminish within the coals and none will be remembered.

Mr Profiteer

Rock music, cigarette smoke, sweaty bodies morphed into one
That's how we met, instant passion occurred
Gloomy dark vibrations drumming in our ears
Sex, drugs, rock n roll baby!
The hunger that night for your long wet kiss

Different nationalities problem from the start
Not for us but for the people surrounding us
A love with a insecure future ahead
Lots of fights, lots of tears
My heart already broken once

I fought hard for our love
Accepting and receiving the violent blows of others
For you since I was consumed by you
Being to good to you from the start
Has now broken my fragile heart

Spending all my money on you
Loves makes blind..I truly believe
Fucking Fool
Oh my god..

All that I sacrified for you and your love
Is only being paid back in betrayal and hurt
Sweet words doesn't mean anything
This is not what I deserve, what have I done?

I've only been so good to you.

No more arguing, no more defending you in front of others
I had enough, look at that other woman.
Can she play together with your part?
I can not tell you how much I loved you..
But you've finally broken my heart

Okay .. I'll try .

Acheing Memories

As I lay there in your arms ,
I'd never felt so safe and warm .
Months ago I could've called you mine ,
Oh how I wish I could turn back time .

You we're everything I'd never known ;
I couldn't believe the love you'd shown .
For hours you had held me tight ,
Trying to make all his wrongs right .
You dried my tears and made me laugh,
Helping me forget the past .

The silly things that you would do
Would make me want to be with you .
Even though I knew much better ,
I hoped I could be yours forever .

You held me close and kissed my eyes :
"No longer will you have to cry .
I love you girl , I really do ;
Please tell me that you love me too ."
Your lips touched mine and my heart felt weak
As brand new tears slid down my cheeks :
"I want to boy , you know I do ..
Just promise me your words are true ."

With one last kiss upon my head ,
I learnt to trust the things you said ;
And as that night faded into day ,
My hand in yours I prayed we'd stay .

Summer days were filled with laughter ;
It seemed to be like nothing mattered .
But as the leaves fell to the ground ,
We seemed to lose what we had found .

You had no time , it had to end ;
So we parted ways remaining friends .
You begged and pleaded "Please don't cry ."
I smiled and told you "I'll be fine ."

But now I lay me down to sleep ,
And hug myself as I start to weep .
Over and over I replay that night ,
When everything had felt so right .

Colors of the Wind

by NyellMoonlight

Your soul was given to me
with a cellophane
and an instruction manual.

Sweet petals of oxygen
died within glassy lungs.

Your soul was colored as the wind-
sepia constellations managed to grow
watered with woe,
dissecting warmth
of the nights shared...

... and after all these years
that bitter zephyr
still caresses my thoughts.

Thank you very much for the placing, and I greatly appreciate it!