Title Contest #2 By His Angel

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Cyber Saiyan
    Beautiful Chaos
    simplyfrigid
    are the winners

    Winnings:
    1st place: 6 r/r/c
    2nd place: 4 r/r/c
    3rd place: 2 r/r/c

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    One Night & Laying Here Thinking

  • Mask of Pain
    16 years ago

    Reget plz and thank you.

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Reserve "On The Drive Home" and "Never Ending Pain".

    Thanks.

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Never Ending Pain - AKA Pain is a Four Letter Word.

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1074159

    ( Not sure if you consider it explicit, but I would rather be safe than suspended )

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    One the Drive Home - AKA Heart Braking

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=997739

    ( Again, not sure if its explicit or not. It is pretty long, but I think the flow carries it well. )

  • Mask of Pain
    16 years ago

    Regret
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1100630

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    One Night

    It took love but one moment
    To break my beating heart
    On second thought, you take the blame
    You tore it all apart

    One minute we were happy
    Years now I've been sad
    Convinced that love is not a friend
    Believing I was mad

    All found to be beautiful
    Through love's enraptured view
    Seemed to somehow melt away
    In angry thoughts of you

    It never really disappeared
    I just refused to see
    The beauty in the loneliness
    That's shrouding the real me

    The wall I built to keep love out
    Has fallen on this night
    My soul is naked, here I stand
    Reborn in loves pale light

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Nice job guys keep them coming. Anyone else like to give it a try?

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    I will. (:

    I'll reserve:

    Shooting Star
    and
    Killing me slowly

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Shooting Star.

    Survivors in this game of love -
    you've yet to break my heart.
    I still dream the dreams of misery,
    as you hold what's fallen apart.

    My hands have yet to touch yours,
    my lips have yet to kiss so gently.
    My heart still plays that music though
    that sings a lovely song for you...
    as I wish upon a shooting star
    that somehow we'll get through.

    Soldiers in this battle won,
    we've fought and fought to find
    that somehow we're not meant to be,
    with all that's left behind.

    My hands no longer want yours,
    my lips no longer linger.
    My heart no longer plays that music,
    which sung a lovely song to you,
    as I wished upon a shooting star,
    that somehow we'd get through.

    Parents of the world to come,
    you've yet to win me back again
    as I still dream the dreams of misery,
    from which a lover failed to friend.

    My hands still somehow need yours,
    my lips still secretly yearn.
    My heart does hum that music,
    which whispers a lovely tune to you...
    as I wish upon a shooting star,
    that somehow we'll still make it through.

    'Tis moments that seem unending,
    and love that seems unfailing.
    The memories we've shared together,
    that stops us from unraveling.

    ....My hands have yet to touch yours,
    my lips have yet to kiss so gently.
    My heart still plays that music though,
    that sings a lovely song for you...
    as I wish upon a shooting star,
    that somehow we'll get through.

    - - - - -

    Killing me slowly.

    Strung about the fields of glory,
    thy words have held me through.
    Brought the future to my knees,
    filled the well with thoughts of you.
    Shaped the blossoms into fate,
    preparation for time again.
    Forgotten sins of lonesome hearts,
    sought forth a world to designate.

    Thy words have told the truth to me,
    mistaken not the death of souls.
    For love has come to take aback,
    everything a heart shall lack.
    Spoken lies from a weakened heart,
    killing me slowly... time shall depart.
    For, strung about the fields of glory,
    thy words have held me through...

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Due date will be the 12th.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    Laying Here Thinking

    That's all I do
    Lay here and think
    Dreaming of something
    To fashion in ink

    Some sweet little tale
    A dark, scary thought
    Life as it happens
    All which we sought

    The bee and the flower
    The sun and the moon
    Whispered sweet nothings
    To make the heart swoon

    What do I feel
    As I lay here today
    Inspiration please find me
    And take me away

    My musings are calling
    Wishing to dance
    To live on this paper
    If given the chance

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    "Slipped Away"

    Please. :)

    Post it here?

    =)

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    ~ Slipped Away ~
    By Nicole Pirri

    At first I thought you were winning,
    Bruised by this lonely heart.
    Soon I felt that our chances were thinning-
    Both growing further apart.

    Every time we say our goodbyes,
    We know we'll see each other once again.
    Back into your arms my heart flies;
    The lamb in the lion's den.

    Wanting to believe that we'll soon end,
    Finishing the agony we both feel.
    I don't want to be just your 'friend'.
    Why is she such a big God damn deal?

    All hope we had is now lost,
    As you stand there with your bouquet.
    We've both paid this priceless cost-
    From my arms you slipped away.

    Written By: Nicole Pirri
    Monday, 8th December, 2008.
    Copyright.

    =)

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Keep them coming guys. Anyone else?

  • Adelle
    16 years ago

    Laying Here Thinking please - Ok done

    Lying here thinking of such innocence
    I can't understand what she did wrong
    And if she didn't was she just a tool
    In your ultimate plan

    It seems to harsh why let her suffer
    And that of her parents, the doctors and nurses
    Only a new baby what can we say
    She was early to begin with
    Six weeks to the day

    Must she go through so much pain?
    In hospital now she can't complain
    Not old enough to talk
    Not strong enough to breathe God why?

    Why allow this to someone so young
    New to this world she's only just began
    Only you Lord know if she will pull through
    Why lord why should she suffer?

    Lying here thinking I just don't understand

  • Nicole the Fairy
    16 years ago

    When is the due date?

    =)