3 for 1

POEM: Bellicose.

I actually like the poem (more the meaning of it) but the main problem I'm having with it is if the first 2 stanzas should stay or go. As well as other things, if seen.

I really want honest comments on this poem. So, if you don't give me good comments then I won't give good comments back. I usually say that but I still give good ones. And, if you don't include your opinion on the first 2 stanzas then you'll probably end up with a very short comment.

Thanks in advance. (:

I'm on it. Do you think you could read my new ones? Thanks

Finished.

Anyone else?

I'm on it, think you could do "Sun, Spar and Rain", "You'll Never Forget" And "One Love"? Thanks

Done. (:

Anyone else??

(I've many more that need commented on - I will return the favor with others. How many I return depends on how good the comments are. Most likely 1for1 but if you do good I'll probably give 2for1)

Living with a Farce