Need a females opinion

If you could please read "The first time I've ever did anything" its preety dear to my heart and for someone special but I wanna make sure its good before I give it to her

It was beautiful.

She'll love it. =)

xox

Austin,
i think it's a good poem but it's to repetitive. if you needs some examples i can give you, but note that the moment it comes from your heart, this person will be flattered and not paid too much attention. honest luck.