Need suggestions...

- Name : Unrequited
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- Joined : Feb 13, 2005
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Unrequited
15 years ago

Could some of you please read my new poem "As I Watch the Sky", and give me some feedback/suggestions?

I would greatly appreciate it. :)

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- Name : Unrequited
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- Joined : Feb 13, 2005
- Posts : 131
Unrequited
15 years ago

Anyone??

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- Name : Brittany C
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- Joined : Sep 19, 2006
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Brittany C
15 years ago

Done, please r/r/c "Hotel" if you are not in to that type of poem feel free to pick another one.

Thanks :)

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- Name : CanUKissAwayMyPain
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- Joined : Jun 17, 2008
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CanUKissAwayMyPain
15 years ago

Give me a momento to check it out...

Whoa.. please dnt change it. it's perfect.
can u do " HIM "
=)

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