Need suggestions...

  • Unrequited
    16 years ago

    Could some of you please read my new poem "As I Watch the Sky", and give me some feedback/suggestions?

    I would greatly appreciate it. :)

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  • Unrequited
    16 years ago

    Anyone??

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  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Done, please r/r/c "Hotel" if you are not in to that type of poem feel free to pick another one.

    Thanks :)

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  • CanUKissAwayMyPain
    16 years ago

    Give me a momento to check it out...

    Whoa.. please dnt change it. it's perfect.
    can u do " HIM "
    =)

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