Two newest please? :)

Please, your opinions? :) I'll comment back on whatever yours you'd like. ^_^

I commented and rated both of your poems...
I would most appreciate, if you could r/r/c :

Because I Love You
Total Eclipse

thank you so much in advance

I did yours and a few extra... just do however many of my featured poems that appeal to you.

Thank you :) I really apperiate your honest comments. I'll try to rewrite Girlish Crushes to make it longer and I dunno... more what I was trying to paint. I just got so frustrated not being able to word everything I wanted to say I ended up saying not enough lol.

I commented back on both of yours and Minkus, I'll read a few more of yours too. (for doing so criticing so of mine & I really apperiate it) And btw on Windows thanks for pointing out the typo. lol. I didn't even notice till I looked back at it for the 10th thinking "what is he talking about?" lol ;)