3 for 1

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    I have many new poems. And, I'd like a lot of feed back on them.

    For the first one you do, you'll get a return of 3.
    The next 4 after that you'll get a return of 2.
    Any after that will be 1.

    Examples:
    You do 1 ... I do 3.
    You do 3 ... I do 7
    You do 7 ... I do 13.

    (and so on)

    - - -

    I'll return every comment I get. I'm very honest, if it sucks I'll tell you. I give long comments so I expect long comments. If you do NOT give me decent comments you will not get them in return. As many of you learned last time I did a deal, you don't get much more than what you give.

    But trust me, if your comments are decent mine will be spectatuclar.

    Thanks in advance. (:

    - - -

    ` Leave titles or I'll randomly choose. ... And, trust me it's VERY random. Not just most recent.

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    My Latest please , thanks

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Done.

    Anyone else?

  • Faithless
    15 years ago

    Heys it would be great if u could comment my poem :

    Secret Love

    the other 2 i leave it up to u;)
    thx in advance

  • SashaMirage
    15 years ago

    HI, I r/r/c on "A Flames Love"

    So could you please read these 3 for me:

    Only a Kiss
    Lights, Camera, Action
    Cinnamon Dreams

    Thanks in advance

  • AngelicDecadence
    15 years ago

    Hello, I r/r/c on one of your poems, (i may do more later, I just don't have time right now)

    Please r/r/c back on :

    My Guardian Angel
    Hell
    Fallen

    Thank you, they are some of my featured (i think) and i will post back here if i do any more. :)
    Have a good one,
    *Chaotic Angel*

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Thank you so much. (:

    I don't have the time tonight.
    But I will ABSOLUTELY do them this weekend.

  • AngelicDecadence
    15 years ago

    Okay, I've now done "Lucielle" (i think its called) and I am reposting as i said i would :) Amazing write by the way.

    If you could, r/r/c on these:
    Don't Trust Me
    More

    Thanks!! :D

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Finished. (:
    Anyone else?

  • Faithless
    15 years ago

    Ok I just did ur poem:Turn around and look at me.

    Ok i just did a collab with my partner.It would be great if you can copy and paste ur comment on to her site too
    it's called:

    1)Unexplained Connection

    (My Site)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1104233
    (Her Site)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1104232

    2)Birthday Grieve
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1104146

    3)The Call
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1102871

    Thx in advance;)

  • Brandon Lee
    15 years ago

    Done
    I did city of colour.

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Simplyfrigid I find your critiques very honest yet gently contructive and cannot resist this chance to have your valued suggestion. most of my latest are not yet published and i have taken most of your suggestions and edited

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    I've updated all of them except Michael's.

    Michael: I'm going to add you to my favorites. Not only do you deserve it but I believe that I now owe you 18 comments? Correct me if I'm wrong. It may be more, but I think you comment 6? I'll take another look when I get down to the last few of the 18 to double check. It'll take a few days but I will get them done. Promise. (:

    Anyone else???

  • LuvMeAlwayz
    15 years ago

    Hi, i did some of yours. You can randomly choose from mine whichever one u like. thanks in advance.

    Oh n Happy New Year everyone!

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Updated.

    Anyone else?

  • Phantasma
    15 years ago

    I did "Turn around and look at me"
    Great poem btw =]
    Can you please do:
    "Some Would Say Its Nonsense I Say It's Only A Bit Odd"
    "Gray roses"
    "Picnic table jigsaws"
    Thanks =]

  • Steven Topaz
    15 years ago

    In the Arms of My Angel + anything on featured

    Im about to comment.