**Poetry Sessions** [1]

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Results:

3rd place: Lonely Rider- Hypocrite
2nd place: Beautiful Chaos- Smoke & Mirrors
1st place: simplyfrigid- Tangled Up In Me

Prises--
3rd place- 3 comments
2nd place- 5 comments
1st place- 7 comments

Smoke and Mirrors please

Reserve "Ghosts"

Smoke and Mirrors please! Thanks =]

I'll reserve Tangled Up In Me.

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Tangled Up In Me.

Forbid my heart to sing?
How dare you humble me!
Shan't we find the truth,
hidden inside thee.

Your words are not enough,
to take me down in size.
For little shall go wrong,
tangled up in lies.

Behold the gruesome scene,
left for all your cries.
'Tis torment at your feet!
Darling, die within demise.

Challenge me, I dare you.
Forget what you shall see -
I've left no tracks of horror
Tangled up in me.

Tangled up in me:

I broke through the doors and I cried
I knew nobody would follow me
If I just got outside

I was greeted by the stinging bite of the winter air
And the smell of stale cigarettes
That's when you know you're completely alone

I could see my breathe in front of me
I guess that's how you know you're alive
If only broken hearts were that easy

I knew they wouldn't come here
It's colder than I thought
But that that makes me think clearer

Or something

I was greeted by the stinging bite of the winter air
And the smell of stale cigarettes
That's when you know you're completely alone

Then the very fabric of reality
The stuff that makes things real
It all got tangled up in me

The same threads that hold us at heart
They hold us to the ground
They keep us apart

I'll scream loud enough for you to hear me
I'll scream loud enough for you
I guess they call this string theory

Reserve "Hypocrite "

Reserve Heart Of Glass plz.

Heart Of Glass

I could feel my heart shatter
When you told me it was over
Did my feelings not matter?
Was I just another lover?

I told you at the very start
That you had to be gentle
Because I had a fragile heart
And I was very accidental

You said okay I'll be cautious
Don't worry I'll keep you unharmed
All your lies are now making me nauseous
I can't see how I was never alarmed

Then when you'd had enough of me
You went and smashed my glass heart
You said sorry we just couldn't be
Then you went and tore me apart

Now I just want to know
Before you leave me and go
Why did you have to smash
My fragile heart of glass

~KM~

Hypocrite

(for the so-called Politicians)

Showering tender promises
sandhills they erect,
smashing nation's structure
with claims to resurrect.

Words echoed through lips
are betrayed by their eyes,
glorified hope dont balm
plight of innocent lives.

Their frozen soul condemn
the minds that conspire,
Still warm up their den
from flames of victim's pyre.

Can I reserve 'Ghosts' please?

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Ghosts

Whispers of forgotten dreams
Float around my bedroom.

I am alone
In my sleep deprived state,
So no one can confirm my discoveries.

My loved ones,
Cherished in their fulfilled lives,
Live again in this celestial moment.
They awaken from their dormant memories
In my now confused mind.

Radiating the purest light,
My family glides out of my window
Into the starless night,
Leaving my room forgotten, once again.

In my dreams, they shall live on.
I have learnt from this blessed haunting
That you should never attempt to hold on:

Their light will shine upon the world,
Bringing the most ironic gift of all:
Light, life, purity, hope,
From those who died of the darkest sins.

Ghosts plz and Thank you

Shot to pieces please

Ghost
My ghost of the pass pain comes to hurt me with the though of the bad I've done. The ghost flies over me and I seared to touch it, for it may kill me. I sit in my room in a ball and I just want to escape from this pain. The pain comes so fast, the though of My ex, the thoughts of hurting a friend, the though of why people hate me, the thoughts of the pain I felt years before. How could this one ghost bring so much pain with just thoughts. I mean I've though about this stuff but it never really hurt as much as it does now. I want this ghost to part and to take is thoughts with him. I stand up to touch but the ghost screams it horror. He flies out the window and I'm filled with joy knowing that he will never come back.

Smoke & Mirrors

Saw her one day
So pretty
So perfect
Smiling
From her coven of evil

How breezy it must be
On her high horse
Named Arrogance
Though every hair remains
In place

We common folk
Falling to the urban legend
Perfection
But nothing is flawless

This paragon of popularity
Falters when the bell rings
Home isn't such a pretty thought
You'd never read it on her face though
Unless you knew what to look for

Daddy in jail
For his dirty thoughts
And savage hands
That to this day
Drip with her innocence

Mommy
Drunk on shame
And full of blame
Wishing everyday for him
Instead of her

School
This persona
Her only pitiful escape
Her only release
For the fire raging inside

I almost feel sorry for her
Embracing destruction
Humiliation
Flows too perfectly
From her vicious facade

"Hypocrite" and "Shot to Pieces" please and thank you

Results:

3rd place: Lonely Rider- Hypocrite
2nd place: Beautiful Chaos- Smoke & Mirrors
1st place: simplyfrigid- Tangled Up In Me

Great poems ^^^

Please PM me with the titles of the poems you want me to comment on :)

3rd place- 3 comments
2nd place- 5 comments
1st place- 7 comments

Bugger... just finished it as well. haha, never mind