please help me with my poems

  • karima
    20 years ago

    i always write sad poems, and i really want to be able to write nice ones(love) what can i do, do i just try harder or wait till it comes to me? kaz041089

  • Jenn
    20 years ago

    hey. I read your poems and I liked them I left a comment on one...and I know how your feeling if the razor thing and blood thing is true..you can talk to me if you want because I have been there.....read some of my poems if you want to.....well keep writing.....

  • blackrose1011
    19 years ago

    just let yourself go..... and by the sounds of it you have.... satle mascusisum.... is that how you spell it? but if you want to write about happy love, just think about what makes you happy, even just start with lists. i know i cant do it....

  • lisa
    19 years ago

    alot of times its easier to write sad poems because we take the bad things alot harder into thought then the good things. and its a way to let out anger sr stress. if you want to write about love you can write about what you think love is; what it's about or you could write about how someone can receive love and trust from you. it's alot easier when your in love,... the words will just flow out nonstop. just dig out all your feelings about someone you love, like how you feel when they look at you kiss you talk to you . anything. when i was in love i felt as if i was floating in the air the whole time lol. its a good feeling... i hope i helped and good luck with your writing._lisa_