New poem - just got dumped after 2 years... :(

Hey guys, just got out of a 2 and a half year relationship and I'm pretty depressed. I wrote this poem called City Screams/Liquid Dreams. Feel free to read it and comment. I'll do the same in return! Thanks guys.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1103054

Already on it kiddo! Thanks :) No wonder why yours had WIN next to it, it was amazing, lol.

Done Done Done. :] Awesome Job. If you could, do one of my featured or any that catches your eye. ;)

Done. great job. im sorry about your relationship. i hope you feel better.