1:2 maybe 3

  • Steven Topaz
    15 years ago

    Depends on your comment, I can give heartless comments like you might give me, Or give very indepth comments that you could give me, but very few of you do, You decide your fate, Want some help, Help me

    "In the Eyes of a Soldier Pt.1 (collab)"

    and If you wouldnt mind Copying and Pasting this to his copy of the poem also, If not ill simply send it to him Thanks, Ill be waiting

  • H E Losey
    15 years ago

    Did a critique on the requested piece, my fate as always shall remain within my hands and my honesty.

  • Cotton Candy Clouds
    15 years ago

    Done : )

    do as many poems you feel i deserve!

    i request my latest poem " Hopeless Romantic but Kicking the Habit" to be done at least please : )