Parallelogram de Crystalline (Form Contest)

Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan God's Warrior dedicated to his soul mate Crystal Rose. This form consists of 4 verses 3 line in each verse. The syllable count for each stanza is 3,6,9. In this style of poem the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described...

Rules:
1. MUST be new.
2. Any form or style.
3. Any genre.
4. I would prefer no profanity.

Due: Dec. 31

Have fun!

1st place winner will recieve 3 comments on any 3 poems of their choice.

2nd place winners will recieve 2 comments on any 2 poems of their choice.

3rd place winners will recieve 1 comment on any poem of their choice.

Entrants:
1. Gem
2. Azzzza
3. Sluvious

Here is an example:

Alluring Beauty...(Parallelogram de Crystalline)by Karan Gods Warrior

Enlightened
By your tender beauty
Moon conceals herself behind the clouds

Shimmering
Upon the silent sea
Stars do admire your alluring smile

Glimmering
In the tranquil cold night
Fireflies dance on the beat of your heart

Fluttering
Prancing on gentle buds
Butterflies kiss your delicate lips

Enter me!! haha

I want you to write in this form and compare the love to nature.

Natural (Parallelogram de Crystalline)

Open sea
Eyes glisten sparkling green
beautiful pearl within coral reef

Open sky
Rainbows and butterflies
Small colourful angel in disguise

Open land
Trees producing sweet fruits
Love entangles spining around vines

Cinnamon
Aromatic spice scent
Perfume from nature's forest garden

Xx Starlit Eyes xX

Shimmering
Bright snippets of pure light
Representing the glow from sweet spheres

Sparkling
Suppressed laughter is seen
Within depths of cerulean winks

Glistening
Such translucent beauty
Flickering colours, bewitching orbs

Twinkling
Stars embedded above
Are no match for your beautiful eyes

CopyrightGemmaStott2009
17/01/09 - 22.51

K lol this is long past due but it seems only 3 people entered so there will be only 1 winner.
And the winner is gem, congrats! Just Pm me with which poems you would like me to comment on.

Oh my thankyou!!!! =)))

You've cheered up an otherwise horrible day =))