A little new one for critique

  • H E Losey
    15 years ago

    Be glad to critique yours if you wish.

  • Cotton Candy Clouds
    15 years ago

    Feel free to ! i would really appreciate "hopeless romantic but kicking the habit" to be done!! ill so return the favor : )

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Done :)

    my latest please

  • Pamela
    15 years ago

    I wouldn't mind if you would comment mine, I want people to C&C my poems.

    =]

  • SashaMirage
    15 years ago

    "Only a Kiss" and "Lights, Camera, Action" please and thanks in advance!