Wahhooooo new poem. I'll return the fav

Please read my new poem, " destroying my own invention" its not quite done but i really want some help with it so if you have time please take a few seconds to check it out. and leave in the comment box what you want me to read, I love everything so feel free to list a couple poems for me to check out!

The Whole Truth and nothing but

Done.

I am seeking input on my erotic poems, but if you are not comfortable with this type of writing you can just choose any title that catches your eye.

Best wishes; keep writing.

K done yours

It would be great if you could comment on:

Cross Crescent Candles

Thx in advance;)