New Poems ~ 2-2

Okay, have you read Twilight?
Its probably one of my fav books.
So I wrote two poems!
Into The Light- This is what I think Edward Cullen was thinking when he first saw Bella.
Into The Light: Bella's Side- This is what I think Bella Swan thought when she saw Edward.

This is a 2-2, and just post here your reactions and which poems you want commented. I want constructive criticism... no one-liners please and thank you!

Krista