New Poem. [[1 FOR 1]]

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Simple deal.
    I have a new poem,
    "Tears Are Words The Heart Cannot Say."
    Read and comment please.
    I'd appreciate in depth comments,
    no one to three liners. Be honest.
    Leave title after youre finished please.

    :]

  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    I second your nomination I LOVE YOUR POEM

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.
    Thank you for sharing that piece with me.

    :]
    Anyone else?

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Done ... my latest please :)

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Sadies Heart - done.

    Ill be generous, but I ask you all please give me in depth, honest comments. No 1-3 liners. Thank you.

    Ill get to the others ASAP. :]

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Kevin Kerbz - done.
    [I hope I wasnt too harsh.. sorry.]

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Lonely Rider - done.

    Anyone else?
    You may also comment my poem "Rainkissed Leaves" for another 1-1 deal if anyone is interested.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Anyone else interested?

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Classic Cliche
    or
    To Davaroono:

    Whichever you please. (:

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    -Stupid Me

    please and thank you
    :~)Spirit(~:

  • heartbrokengrl
    15 years ago

    I commented it, and i must say very beautiful, I'd appreciate if you could comment my newest poem "My time To Go" and if you have any better suggestions for the title it would be greatly appreciated.

  • Quietly Versed
    15 years ago

    Going to do it, please take a look at any of your choosing. Pick a title that catches your eye.

  • Quietly Versed
    15 years ago

    I also did rainkissed leaves

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Oh wow, I forgot about this.
    Ill get your comments to you ASAP.
    Sorry for the delay.

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

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