Free comments

  • No Need For A Name
    15 years ago

    I've decided to hand out some free comments. Now, don't post here unless you honestly believe your good. I have so far read nothing on this site that I've considered good, let alone great, and for varoius reasons. My comments may not be as in-depth as some of you would want, but I prefer to give guidelines to correction, not direction to correction. My rules are
    1. You must give me a specific title. No exceptions
    2. You may request that a comment on a new poem every Sunday, along with the corresponding week. I lose track of days easily and this may help me.
    3. I will only do as many comments on that day as a see fitting. I'm providing a service at my speed, not yours.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    I'm not quite sure that I understand rule number two.. but

    Please comment..
    "Learning to Dance in the Rain."

    Thank you.

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Nature at it's best

  • NyellMoonlight
    15 years ago

    "Songs To Sing For You" please :)

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    "Hypocrite" please

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Can you please do, "In The Eyes Of A Soldier (Collab Part 2)"

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • Brittney Follett
    15 years ago

    "If your good" well well. It all depends on your own perception. I may think i'm good. But some else may say I suck. I hope you judge me truthfully.

    Fear's Comeuppance

    Enjoy. And thank you.

  • HidinVictim
    15 years ago

    "This Ain't a Musical" please... I don't know how good it is but I could surely use the advise thank you very much

  • ether
    15 years ago

    "Painting the Days With Your Watercolour Tears"
    Thank you!

  • Spirit
    15 years ago

    Hey I have a few.
    I Know that it is only friday but i hope that by getting them in early that you'll have time to read them.

    -duct tape mind
    -message
    -little birdy

    If i can only have one done please do the 2nd one.

    *Hey truth be told I don't think that i'm all that good, and all the good reviews are starting to annoy me. when you said that your comments are harsh i thought, maybe you could help me out. thanks

  • khobo
    15 years ago

    Can you do "Preception"? thanks a bunch

  • The Dark Poet
    15 years ago

    Till Death Do Us Part or The Me I Used To Be. Thanks in advance

  • Sherry Lynn
    15 years ago

    Thine Heart Bleedeth

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    15 years ago

    Please do

    - Dear You; Sincerely Me
    &&
    - The Want Of Perfect

  • No Need For A Name
    15 years ago

    Read the rules, or you will get no comments

  • Hurtingsoul
    15 years ago

    Thank you for the free comments....
    "the perfect world" would be nice to get a comment on. thank you

  • Cotton Candy Clouds
    15 years ago

    Thank you for doing this : )

    "Not Good Enough for Truth or Cliche"

    Thank you again!

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    Classic Cliche

    (:

  • Quietly Versed
    15 years ago

    LOVE IS NOVEL....

    BTW i agree with you, I rarely find poetry on this site that seems well thought out and put together. Seems like a lot of young people writing down their emotions rather than creating art.