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Hello.

If you provide thoughtful comments and critiques on two of my poems ("Would You?" and "Premature Conclusion"), I'll do the same for any four of yours. Just let me know what you want read if you have any preferences.

Thank you.

Okay, I have commented and rated one. I will do the other ones as I get time - which will most likely be tomorrow.

Hey I'm in

please do the first four that catch your eye.

thanks a ton
>~Spirit~>

Sure thanks
the perfect world, the executioner, you love me?, and unspoken story would be nice