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Name : Poet on the Piano
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Joined : Oct 7, 2007
Posts : 7471

Hello everyone, I would like to give out free comments to everyone who would like them.

~Please no erotic/explict poems
~Please no cutting pieces
~One poem per entry, but you can ask again for another poem later on
~This will go on for a long time, maybe a month or so, I don't know but don't be afraid to ask for me to comment on your piece
~Please leave titles, otherwise I will just do your latest

Thanks everyone and have a great day!

- Name : Cyber Saiyan
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- Posts : 375
Cyber Saiyan
15 years ago

Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1072926

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Name : Teria
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Jun 3, 2006
Posts : 1747

Teria
15 years ago

Would you please do:

Classic Cliche.

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I also have a post up like this, if you'd like to ask for comments. THERE ARE RULES so be sure to read first.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=116862

- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Above are all done, thank you!

Anymore while I'm online?

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- Name : Cotton Candy Clouds
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- Joined : Jan 1, 2007
- Posts : 287
Cotton Candy Clouds
15 years ago

"Not Good Enough For Truth or Cliche"

thank you! : )

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- Name : Spirit
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- Joined : Nov 29, 2005
- Posts : 658
Spirit
15 years ago

-The wanted flight not given (about a tree)

please and thank you

>~Spirit~>

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- Name : Sherry Lynn
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- Joined : Jun 20, 2004
- Posts : 6348
Sherry Lynn
15 years ago

Thine Heart Bleedeth

Thanks Hun

~~Sher

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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- Joined : May 18, 2008
- Posts : 9560
Courageous Dreamer
15 years ago

A Piece of Abstract Artistry.
Thanks.

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- Name : Ash
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- Joined : Apr 19, 2008
- Posts : 46
Ash
15 years ago

Wrong was I...

Thank you in advance

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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- Joined : Jun 16, 2005
- Posts : 8267
Italian Stallion
15 years ago

Can you please do, "In The Eyes Of A Soldier (Collab Part 1)"

Thanks in advance, Joe

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- Name : NyellMoonlight
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- Joined : Apr 23, 2007
- Posts : 1745
NyellMoonlight
15 years ago

"Because I Love You" please :)

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Everyone is done, I really enjoyed reading your pieces..

Anyone else?

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Very nice piece soso, I enjoyed reading it!

This is still open, would anyone else like free comments?

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- Name : xxxStarSxxx
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- Joined : Apr 5, 2005
- Posts : 536
xxxStarSxxx
15 years ago

Hey, could you please do

"Still Mine"

Thank you!

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Anymore people while I'm still online?

The same person can ask for another poem just as long as its not in the same entry....

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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Italian Stallion
15 years ago

Can you please do, "In The Eyes Of A Soldier (Collab Part 2)"

Thanks in advance, Joe

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- Name : Courageous Dreamer
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- Posts : 9560
Courageous Dreamer
15 years ago

"Hold Me Tight, Don't Let Go"
Please & Thank you.

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Both of you are done, thanks...

Please keep them coming, I would like to read some poems...

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- Name : Brittney Follett
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- Joined : Sep 10, 2005
- Posts : 677
Brittney Follett
15 years ago

Our Downfall. Thanks :)

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Done both of you.

Keep them coming please, any of your poems I'll comment for free!

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- Name : Blissful
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- Joined : Oct 13, 2007
- Posts : 6284
Blissful
15 years ago

`Don't Pursue; It Will Find You.`

please and thank you. :]

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- Name : xToBeWithYoux
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Apr 27, 2008
- Posts : 1545
xToBeWithYoux
15 years ago

Heyy, can you do 'You Know I'm No Good' please. I really have no idea which category it goes under:

Explicit - Alcohol
or Sadness
or Love

Thanks! :)

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- Name : Italian Stallion
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- Posts : 8267
Italian Stallion
15 years ago

Can you please do, "Distant Heavens"

Thanks in advance, Joe

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- Name : holly
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- Joined : Feb 4, 2006
- Posts : 309
holly
15 years ago

My newest please :)

Thanks xx

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- Name : AngelicDecadence
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- Joined : Sep 13, 2008
- Posts : 988
AngelicDecadence
15 years ago

"Dear Diary Pt. 1"

Please and thank you in advance. :]

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Done with all of you, thank you.

Anyone else?

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- Name : Teria
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- Joined : Jun 3, 2006
- Posts : 1747
Teria
15 years ago

Yes please, would you do:

I'm not kidding a fool, but only a believer

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- Name : InvisiblyHeartless
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- Joined : Jun 19, 2008
- Posts : 2998
InvisiblyHeartless
15 years ago

What You Have (betting it's still hurting)
please and thanks
:]

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Name : PygmyPuff
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Jun 1, 2006
Posts : 693

PygmyPuff
15 years ago

I have a few new ones without any comments. Please critique one at your best. Feel free to chose whichever title appeals to you most (although you certainly cant judge a poem by the title)

- Name : Steven Topaz
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- Joined : Aug 11, 2008
- Posts : 93
Steven Topaz
15 years ago

Loveswitch engage its a unique piece for me using alot of aliterations and its complete freestyle.

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- Name : Nobodys Hero
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- Joined : Jul 12, 2006
- Posts : 192
Nobodys Hero
15 years ago

Would you mind doing my latest called Death's Anomally if you do thanx very much!!!

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Hey guys, I've been busy the last couple of days, and today if I have time I might start them but for sure I will get them done by Friday, thanks for being patient!

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- Name : Mask of Pain
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- Joined : May 31, 2008
- Posts : 346
Mask of Pain
15 years ago

Hey can you post a comment on 'Jingle, Jangle Broken Hearts.'plz and thank you/

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- Name : aDORKable x3
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- Joined : Nov 20, 2004
- Posts : 3301
aDORKable x3
15 years ago

Could you please do Ex's and Oh's thanks a whole bunch! =)

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- Name : Cotton Candy Clouds
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- Joined : Jan 1, 2007
- Posts : 287
Cotton Candy Clouds
15 years ago

If you could do "We face each other smiling and leave it all unsaid" i would appreciate it : )

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- Name : xxxStarSxxx
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- Joined : Apr 5, 2005
- Posts : 536
xxxStarSxxx
15 years ago

Could you please do "Another Chance." Thanks so much!

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- Name : Poet on the Piano
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Poet on the Piano
15 years ago

Created to be Destroyed, PygmyPuff, not waving but drowning, and simplyfrigid are done. I am working on the rest now, thanks!

EDIT: Everyone is done, thank you all!

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- Name : holly
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- Joined : Feb 4, 2006
- Posts : 309
holly
15 years ago

Could you please do Love's Dance?

Thanks a lot. xx

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- Name : Faithless
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- Joined : Sep 6, 2008
- Posts : 657
Faithless
15 years ago

Forever's Obsession

Thx in advance;)

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- Name : Princess of snow
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- Joined : Jan 19, 2006
- Posts : 218
Princess of snow
15 years ago

Please comment my piece titled: "Monsoon."

~thanks. :)

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