1 for 2 or 3

Please do Unable To Capture
and I will do 2 of yours, and if your comment is good* I might do 3.

** Good being defined by constructive and helpful.

One liners will be returned with one liners.

Donee.
Edit: If you could read my newest two?
Thanks a lot =]

Ok... I didn't forget. give me TIME.
i do have things to do.
you will get your comments.
ok?

they will be done before saturday afternoon.

I r/r/c yours! great job : )

if you could r/r/c "we face each other smiling and leave it all unsaid" and "not good enough for truth or cliche"

oh and if i qualify for three comments i would appreciate "hopeless romantic but kicking the habit"

Completed comment and rating on poem "Unable to Capture."
please rate and comment my piece titled:

-Monsoon

~thanks, btw I enjoyed reading "Unable to Capture" you did an amazing job. :)