My First Poem; Please Tell Me What You Think. & I Shall Retu

  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Suggestions On How To Improve Would Be Greatly Appreciated Too =]
    & Sorry If My Comments Aren't Too Technical Or Anything But I'll Try My Best =P
    Thanks Heaps
    xx

    Whoa Sorry My Title Was Too Long, Was Meant To Say I'll Return The Favour =D haha

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  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Yeh Ofcoarse =]

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  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Thanks for all the suggestions, will try to fix them =S
    what poem would you like me to comment?
    xx

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  • Michael D Nalley
    15 years ago

    Please do bell witch

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  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Michael D Nalley, I commented yours but im extremely sorry but I barely understood the meaning of the poem. Soo sorry, would you like to choose another for me to r/r/c cause id be more than happy to =]
    xx

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  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Donee =D
    Anyone Else? =]
    xx

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  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Done.

    A Delicate Touch of Hope please.

    Thank you. :]

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  • Broken Masquerade
    15 years ago

    Finished =]
    And thanks for the suggestions =D
    xx

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  • coverd in darkness
    15 years ago

    Done absolutly loved it thanks for sharing it :) feel free to comment any of mine

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  • Annaam
    15 years ago

    DOne...! :) LOved it... :)

    Please dO 'Lies... And the End'

    Thankx! :)

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