1 for 2 [18th Birthday Poem - Ania]

  • Shinobi
    15 years ago

    Please do my latest poem "18th Birthday Poem - Ania" and I'll return the favor for two of your poems.

    Rules:
    - No one liners. Please write deep critiques that will actually help me with this poem. If you do so, I'll return the favor the same way.
    - Please state your poem's titles. Otherwise I'll comment for poems I choose.

    Thank you and have a pleasant read!

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Done...

    How eternity Looks Like?
    Never Let this go.

    thanks

  • Shinobi
    15 years ago

    Done commenting.

    Anyone else willing to help me?