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Hey guys, i just wrote a new poem called "No more us" If you can comment I will return the favor plus one. Just let me know which ones you want me to do. I need honest criticism. Thank you.

Do my latest called True Love , and anything else ! Thankss .

Okay thanks guys. I'm going to do yours soon. I dont really have time right now. I maybe can get in one or two though.

For everyone else. I am taking this poem off. It's crap and i agree with everyone else. Even though no one actually said it was .crap. I still feel it is. So this post is closed.

Thank you.