Free comments , lets say first 20 poems ?

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okay , here's the deal . I want to get my rank up when it comes to comments , so I'm offering my advice to anyone who needs it . I might do more than 20 .. It depends how bored I get . The only favour I ask in return is that you praise my comments if they're helpful , and it would be nice if you'd check out some of my stuff too , but thats not really necessary .

    Holly Mariee , xoxo

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Can you please do:

    Love's What We Became (Song)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1038337

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • Normal is the Watchword
    15 years ago

    Just either of my last two. The mirror child if you read that one is not based on cutting or suicide. Someone thought that but it's more on a reflection.

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Joe , I already did that one a couple days ago ! :( , I'll do another one though . Any one else ?

  • CHEMICALcaitlin
    15 years ago

    Could you please do "All Felt Lost"? I appreciate any feedback. Thanks. =]

  • Inside the Liar
    15 years ago

    "Stolen By Night" or "Crash Into Me." Either one is fine. Much appreciated.

  • Italian Stallion
    15 years ago

    Actually you did my other song named, "Oh, how I'd do anything" Not... "Love's what we became" But that is Okay.

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    My latest one please and thank you!

  • Marcus
    15 years ago

    Can you please do Solution

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Haha Marcus .. I already did that one too ! I'll do another one though , hope you didn't have another preference =S . Btw , I've been likeing my reads . Open for more !

  • xxxStarSxxx
    15 years ago

    Could you do "another chance"

    Thanks ahead of time!

  • BitterXSweetness
    15 years ago

    Any of mine, please and thank u. ^.^ And if it's helpful I promise I will comment.

  • NyellMoonlight
    15 years ago

    "For a Pessimist, I'm Pretty Optimistic" please :)

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okay .. Finally done with the last few ! Ready again :) . Nice reads .. I voted for some for the contest .

  • ghosts in bloom
    15 years ago

    Please do 'A Lack of Comfort'

    and I will definitely return the favor (:

    Thanks in advance!

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Alrighty .. Done 12 so far , I think I'll past 20 . So , keep em coming .

  • Suicidal Love
    15 years ago

    Any of mine

    thanks =)

  • mrsmoore
    15 years ago

    Any of mine would be nice. Thank you in advance!

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    Lover's and liars, or Ana vs him, please and thank you =)

  • Courageous Dreamer
    15 years ago

    Uhm.
    Letting Go.
    Please.

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Forgotton

    thanks

  • Blissful
    15 years ago

    `Web of Infatuation.`

    please and thank you. :]

  • Hollymariee
    15 years ago

    Okay :) , I have to stop now . Haha i have grades suffering because it . Really well done .. I loved all the reads .