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I need something to do while he's at work and I'm alone in the house.

Sooo...

ONE poem per person.
Leave titles or links. if you leave "My latest" or anything smiliar, I'll simply bypass you.
If you can't handle constructive critiscim (sp?) don't bother posting.

I'll comment around 5 poems per day, depending on other commitments, and time.

I will try as often as possible to keep you updated as to where I'm up to, so you don't think I've forgotten you, as some people in the past have.

I'll close this...when I feel like it? =)

Try this one; I wrote this when I was 14; it was my first "real" poem. Please ignore any grammar, spelling errors etc. I left them in on purpose; I just typed exactly what I put on paper. I am only looking for comments on the meaning itself.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/comments.php?id=1105862

Hi, could you please check out "Colors Fall Like Snow"?

Or my latest...

Just kidding. =)

Thanks!

Seven Red Roses please .

Can you please do:

Oh, How I'd Do Anything (Song)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1109534

Thank you in advance, Joe

I'd appreciate your opinion on "Lower the Flame of Demons".
Thanks in advance :)

Somebody take me home

`Web of Infatuation. `

please and thank you. :]

Please do 'Courage, Uncorked'

Thank you in advance (: <3

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1101431

Thank you :)

..__MiNDYY

I'd appreciate "Looking At You." Thanks in advance.

I would appreciate it if you could do

My Secret Valentine

Thx in Advance;)

Friendly Foe.
Please and thanks.

Cyber Saiyan-The link takes me to the comments, not the actual poem?
Austin-done
Hollymariee-I've previously commented Seven Red Roses, maybe you have another one you'd like me to do?
Italian Stallion-done
Zeenat-done

"Memories Will Live On."
Thank you! :]

I know its a little late to ask, but if you could do this poem for me I'll gladly return the favor :)

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=1110973

I'd be lovely if you could do "Paper Planes"

^_^ Thanks so much!!

--Hari

Could you please do "Two Become One" When you get the time? Thanks,
-Ally

Cyber Saiyan-done

NyellMoonlight-done

Lonely Rider-done

AblissfulDREAM ER-done

Novalyn Grace RRL-done

BrokenREALiTy-done

Inside the Liar-done

Michael-done

Lawliet-done

Be My Escape-done

Thanks!

T e m p s-done

Leth-done

Vanilla-done

Hatori Sensei-done

Hidden Feelings within these Wor-done

Any more?

Pretend. Thanks soo much!! It means the WORLD to me :)

The Wind is Misery.
I know its not good I just wanna know what I can do to make it better.
Thank you

Can you do Haven Rain, please? Thanks in advance!

Could you please do If You Were A Poem, This Would Be It. Bear in mind this was my first poem ever :)

Thanks in advance :)

Possible entrapments, thanks by the way, and I really
need suggestions for improvements right now. . thanks!^^

I wont have much time today, babysitting followed by work =(

I'll get to some tomorrow =)

Could you please do "Beauty?" thanks so much in advance!!

<3

If you don't mind doing "Indescribable" Please. Thanks!! :]

"Sing Me Then," if you have the time. I would post the link, but I am on my phone. Sorry. :)

Loni-done

Anthony Doubal-done

Krathia-done

xToBeWithYoux-done

Kenny AKA LoveStory-done

soso-done

xxSTARSxx-done

Crimson Angel-done

CHYNAdoll-done

Anymore?

Can you do 'do you love me' or sometimes it's hard'?
they're not my best, but they're my most recent.
i appretiate it,
Keleigh