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  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Got you...lol

    I'll double what you do (up to 20 poems).

    Remember to leave titles.

    No one liners, if you do expect the same in return.

    Also, if you don't leave titles and or a link to the poem, Then this offer is invalid.

    This will end when I feel like it, it could be soon, it could be in a long while, who knows? So get this offer while it lasts.

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    I think i'm done with the collab poem, i think it's the latest you have done :P and thanks for the comment, well appreciated ^^

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    If i'll do again some to you, I don't really leave titles unless it's a must so feel free to choose which poem you'll comment. . ;)

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Hmm. . .can work on *Shadows Beneath Heaven* and *Possible Entrapment* I really need constructive suggestions if you please, I would gladly appreciate them. . thank you!

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Kenny AKA LoveStory your poems are done.

    Anyone else?

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    Thanks!

  • CanUKissAwayMyPain
    16 years ago

    Nice..
    Oh... gotcha thanks =)
    um can u do "I'm yours" n "waiting in the shadows, until the sun hits me to shine"

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    XXBleedingxRoseXx your poems are done.

    Anyone else?

  • Aure
    16 years ago

    Http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1112018

    I'd like you to read this poem, I've read your Love's Paradox, it's really outstanding, I've added my vote and my comment.

    I'll read some more of your work, don't feel obliged to read more of mine too (just the one i posted here :p) i'm reading more out of interest

  • umbra
    16 years ago

    I commented and voted on your last most recent poems. Would you please look over all of my poems? I only have eight posted so I hope your title rule won't apply! Thank you, I appreciate any help you may choose to give.

  • Jordan W
    16 years ago

    Ok so I'm about to go to work in a few minutes. I'll read a few of your poems and comment them to the best of my ability. I will finish the rest tomorrow I swear =]. Here is a list of some recent poems that I am dying to have looked over. I will more than likely read and comment more than 10 poems for you.

    Thanks =] heres my list.

    1. An Unnamed Poet
    2. Love No More
    3. Man Apart
    4. I Just Need A Second
    5. A Window In My Pocket
    6. Endless Thoughts of Doubt
    7. When the Day Comes
    8. This Angel Named Juliet
    9. My True Lotus
    10. Edge of Waiting
    11. A Pounding Heart
    12. Dark to Light
    13. I'll Tell You With A Kiss
    14. The Wolf That Howls (edited Version)
    15. Soul of Pitch, Halo of Light
    16. Pathfinding Melody
    17. Tortured Thoughts of a Confused Lover

  • 0BrokenBella0
    16 years ago

    Hi. Could you please read a few of mine? I am on my way over to check out some of yours. My best ones are:
    *Only for Now*
    *Unguarded*
    *Faded*
    *Secret*
    *Breaking*
    *Just One*
    *Invisible*
    *Losing Your Love*

    I would really appreciate the comments. Thanks!
    ~Bella<3

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Aure your poem is done.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    16 years ago

    I did Just To Be With You, could you please do The Family Portrait and It's Not Right, But It's Okay.

    Thank you :)

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Umbra your poems are done.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    I'll get to the rest of these as soon as possible, sorry for the wait, I've been busy with mid-term examinations at school. I'll try to get these done sometime this weekend.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Jordan W your poems are done.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    BellaSmiley your poems are done.

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    XToBeWithYoux your poems are done.

    Anyone else?

  • Faithless
    16 years ago

    I've done urs A Summer Plateau

    Detonating Silence plz

    Thx in Advance;)

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Kira your poem is done.

    Anyone else?

  • Cotton Candy Clouds
    16 years ago

    I r/r/c three of your poems!!!

    if you could do
    1 This absolution is always incomplete, so bittersweet.
    2 You did a number on me and a fantastic job.
    3 We face each other smiling and leave it all unsaid
    4 Not good enough for truth or cliche
    5 Hopeless romantic but kicking the habit
    6 engaging body language

    thank you : )

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Composed Catastrophe your poems are done.

    Anyone else?

  • Nightmare Fiend
    16 years ago

    I did summer plateau.

    Any which you would like to comment is fine. Thanks