IdTakeABulletForYou: Let Me Slip {Just Close Your Eyes}

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Please and thank you.

Done. amazing job.

can u do?
" Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine"
n
" I learn.. To Love..but Trying to Forget..."

please n grachias mucho =)