One for Two :D

  • Hatori
    16 years ago

    I'll give detailed comments for two poems if you comment "Paper Planes".

    Give me a one liner, and I return it. Give me a detailed comment and I'll return the favor. Please post titles, cause it makes my life a lot easier =] thanks!

  • CanUKissAwayMyPain
    16 years ago

    Done. amazing job.

    can u do?

    " Waiting In The Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To Shine"
    n
    " I learn.. To Love..but Trying to Forget..."

    please n grachias =)

  • Hatori
    16 years ago

    All done ^_^

    Anyone else?

  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    Please do my latest

  • umbra
    16 years ago

    Hey there! Your poem was a great read! Would you please do 12:31 and A veteran's love?

  • Hatori
    16 years ago

    Done and done ^_^

    Anyone else??

  • Krathia
    16 years ago

    Done, could you please comment on Haven Rain and Silhouette, please? Just a few lines on your thoughts would do. Thanks!

  • Chelsey
    16 years ago

    I commented on you're poem, nice job.

    you can do any poems of mine that you choose to, preferably my newer one's because i haven't gotten much feedback on them.

    thanks in advance(:

  • Hatori
    16 years ago

    Zeenat-- Done!
    Krathia-- Done!

    I'll finish commenting asap ^_^

  • Italian Stallion
    16 years ago

    Done!!! Excellent write. Can you please do:

    With Her, I Can See (Song)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1112367

    Pride, Honour, and Courage (Collaboration With Valedico)
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1111888

    Thanks in advance, Joe