1 for 5 (seriously)

I need honest indepth opinions on the old write of my poetry narrative 'Wonderland' as well on inputs on where it should be headed (its not the only poetic narrative I'm writing).

So, I'm offered to return 5 of my detailed comments, for any good and through comments on Wonderland. I need opinions on this to see where I go with it next.

Post back here with titles or links and I'll get back as soon as time permits. Thank you!

Link: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=1025103

Doing it right now. give mi a momento

wow that was looonngg... but amazing.
can u do any of my featured poems.
thanks in advance =)

Do which ever you please .. I don't know which you haven't done yet .

My computor says the poem has been deleted

Ok, as of now, March 2nd, I'm CLOSING this - ALL comments will be returned and done tomorrow March 3rd. Thanks for those of you who did comment, and sorry I didnt comment back last weekend, had family business. But alas, you'll get the 5 each you earned :D

Wow, that was really great. I enjoyed reading it a lot; made me think about all the metaphors and syntax and all that wonderful literary jazz :]

You really don't have to do five haha
My latest three would be awesome though

I appreciate it, thank you

This afternoon for sure guys - Sorry I've been failing at life lately. Just stuck in a hole, but I promise this afternoon all comments will be returned.

Okay .. Understood a few days hun , but it's been over a week . Please return the comments asap .