Heartbroken Despair 1-1

  • Krista
    16 years ago

    My new poem.. please check it out.
    No one liners, or I will not give you a comment. 3 or more lines please. I want consructive comments.

    Thanks!

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  • isabel
    16 years ago

    Did yours... :)

    could you please check out:

    Blissful inspiration

    thank you so much ;)

    *isabel*

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  • FlawlesslyTarnished
    16 years ago

    Done..

    A Discontented Heart

    thankyou (:

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  • Krista
    16 years ago

    Okay I just got back from state basketball just 5 minutes ago so I will get to those comments asap.

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  • Michael D Nalley
    16 years ago

    I love your poem

    Could you review "Afflictions"?

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  • Krathia
    16 years ago

    Finito! Can you comment on Silhouette, please?

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  • cowgirlstar26
    16 years ago

    K

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  • Krista
    16 years ago

    Okay, I got everyone commented up.

    cowgirl26, I won't comment your stuff because you did not leave me a comment on mine. I would know if you commented my poem or not, thanks.

    Thank you everyone!

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