Im back, 1for1 I write in depth

I just wrote a poem for the first time in a month because everything had been going perfectly and recently depression came back to her beautiful face and it got at me hard, this poem means the world to me, and im really looking for what people think about it,

my AKA is lostw1th0utlove, so if ive commented you on that one then you know me

Please close i made a new one/