Comment for Comment ^_^

I recently wrote a poem, though in all truth it is a sonnet ((fourteen line poem with certain rhyming format)), for my Ap English class and posted it to see what people thought about it before I turned it in.

Death in the End

Is the title so go read and comment and I will do the same for one of your poems.

p.s. Please make your comment more then one sentence long. I will return your comment with one of at least the same length you give me.