COMMENTS!

Okay, so, here's the deal.

Choose absolutely any of my poems to comment. It doesn't matter if they're brand new or old, featured or not - just any. Leave DETAILED comments, and I will return the favour on the same amount of poems + 2.

So if you comment on 1 of mine, I will comment on 3 of yours.
If you comment on 3 of mine, I will comment on 5 of yours.

NO ONE LINERS. And that doesn't mean I'll accept a couple sentences either; I want some constructive criticism on how to improve my poetry.

Also, LEAVE TITLES or I won't do it.

On you go. :]

I did one of yours, can you please do:

Because You Loved Me (Glosa Verse)
http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1113686

Breath of the Frozen Witch (Collab with TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle)
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1113283

A Summer Plateau
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1113314

Thank you in advance, Joe

Your comments are done, Joe.
Beautiful poetry.

I also did one of yours can you do:

I Feel Your Thoughts
With That Apple Tree
Caught By Your Grasp

Thank you in advance

I did one.

Can you please do Convergence, The Maiden's Letter, and Silhouette, please? Thanks!

Comments have all been returned.

Who's next? ^_^