"I'm Not What You'd Call Okay" 1-1

My latest poem. Please no one liners, or posting in the thread that you read my poem when you really didn't. I won't tolerate that. Please leave titles. Also, I would like constructive criticism, not the usual, "good flow, nice words blah blah blah"

I will return the favor with a comment.

Thanks.
xoxo

Please do "Born out of Balance"

Please do my latest one. thank you.

For those of you that are saying the first line is unfinished, it's not. Take another look. It has a comma, leading into the next line. It's not unfinished, the punctuation just looks kinda misleading if you read it wrong.
Just had to get that out, sorry.

Done & done.

Done. Can you do Convergence, please?

Done, could you do "The Master"

I will do the comments tomorrow night when I have more time, and I'm not on my itouch.
:)