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  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Offering two comments to anyone that leaves helpful, honest comments on my newest poem, "Rhetorical Emotions".

    I was in a pretty lousey (sp?) mood when I wrote it, but I liked the content of the poem. I wanted other opinions as well.

    Either leave titles or tell me to pick my own to comment on. I cannot read your mind.

    Thanks in advance.

    CS

  • a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life
    16 years ago

    Done. great job.
    please do any two of my poems. you choose. thank you in advance.

    Ada

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Done.

    I like dark and explict poems, so I reviewed Lies Leave Your Lips and Evil Puppet.

  • Chelsey
    16 years ago

    (: done.
    it was an amazing poem, i'm bad at critiques because i always think that they'll get mad if i'm to mean but think i'm lying if i'm to nice. it was a good poem, and i hope my comment suffices.

    you can choose any of my poems, any that interest you.

  • Cyber Saiyan
    16 years ago

    Done.

    My Brother and How.