New poem 1 for 2

Well I should be off and on tomorrow and I just wrote a new poem in the wee hours of the morning: Your Favorite Play Toy. Please read and review and as long as its no one-liner I will do the same for 2 of your poems. Pretty good deal I'd say. So check it out please, let me know the titles of your own for my review. Thanks in advance!

I have 2 newish poems in my featured, as well as a few Im recently gone back and revised... Any of those should appreciate some review :)

Done! anyone else up for the offer??

Done
please do Born out of Balance

Done. Can you do Convergence and any other that catches your eye? Thanks!

I wasn't exactly nice, but I belive I met the criteria...could you please comment on "Keep Moving Fingers" thank you.

Peace and prosperities,

(RKD)